AICE Media Studies AS- Yoder, R

         I did not present my project in front of the class. I was not  prepared  and I wasn't ready to present nor did  i  have anything with me to present with. I  did  however, start it and show some of my friends what  i  have done and my ideas  i  want for it. Although,  i  got a zero and didn't present my film and get  feed back  which is why this is a peer review. I got feedback and ideas from friends and family and  i'm  going to tell you what they said. Some of my friends said  i  need a more detailed film. More things happening and suspense. Maybe, music or where you zoom in and zoom out of in movies. Film empty parts or creaking doors to make a suspenseful moment. I am still trying to use  Audobie  in the best way  i  can but  i  haven't really had time to continue the film which is my fault yes. I am trying to work on this project a...

  Portfolio Project       Film                                                                            Title:   The Game                                                                                                Setting/s:   A house after a football game on  Halloween                     ...

                                                                 Concept Refinement   I did not pitch during my class period, so I decided to pitch to a couple of my friends at lunch and to other classmates from other classes.  I had given them a paper to write down notes on how I did or if I  was not  broad enough. When I pitched my film, I could see  a couple  different facial expressions. It was  confusion  and  the other facial expression would be them smiling or laughing and a couple  of others  a little scared.  After pitching I asked them what their thoughts were on it. One of my friends at lunch said that I wasn't broad enough. Another friend I sit with said that I needed to describe more on what was going on and how the problem started. Three people  i...