Concept Refinement
Concept Refinement I did not pitch during my class period, so I decided to pitch to a couple of my friends at lunch and to other classmates from other classes. I had given them a paper to write down notes on how I did or if I was not broad enough. When I pitched my film, I could see a couple different facial expressions. It was confusion and the other facial expression would be them smiling or laughing and a couple of others a little scared. After pitching I asked them what their thoughts were on it. One of my friends at lunch said that I wasn't broad enough. Another friend I sit with said that I needed to describe more on what was going on and how the problem started. Three people i...